英语续写优秀学生范文第1篇
①iwasseizedbyanger.我充满了愤怒。
②Hewasfumingwithrage.他气得大发雷霆。
③Hisangerboiledover.他的愤怒爆发了。
④Hecouldhardly/scarcelycontainhisrage.他几乎控制不住怒火。
⑤Hewasbreathingfireandfury.他充满着怒火。
⑥Hisvoicetrembledwithanger.他的声音因愤怒而颤抖。
⑦Hegavemealookofburninganger.他愤怒地看了我一眼。
⑧Heglaredatmewithburningeyes.他用灼热的目光怒视着我。
⑨Heflaredupattheword.他一听到这个字就勃然大怒。
⑩Hisfacecloudedwithanger.他气得脸色阴沉。
英语续写优秀学生范文第2篇
Somefishareforcedtoleavepollutedwaterandareflyinginthesky.Butunfortunately,airisalsosopollutedthattheyhavetowearmasks.eachofthemiscrying,“whereismyhome?”whataterriblesight!
mankindhasbroughtsomuchpollution.wasteisbeingpouredintoriversandseas.poisonstokillpestsinfarmingandchemicalsgointoriversandseas,too.poisonousgassesfromfactoriesalsomaketheairsodirty.thewholebalanceofnatureisbeingdestroyedasaresultofourignoranceoftheenvironmentalprotection.
personally,mancannotlivealoneontheearth.Shouldfishdiefromseriouspollution,sowouldman!itishightimewedidsomethingtopreventsuchascenefromhappening.
英语续写优秀学生范文第3篇
1.Stunned,istoodupandgaveheranawkwardhug/huggedherinanawwardway.
2.Speechless,shesmiledradiantlyandgatheredhersonintoherarms.
3.theneareritgot,themoreshewavedtheyellowblousewildly.
4.themantookthesacks,reachedintohispocketandplacedfourcoinsinReuben'shand.
5.then,clutchingthetincan,heheadedfortheshop.
6.HeparkeddownthestreetfromBobby'shouse,andrushedtohisfrontdoor,tremblingwithexcitement.
7.themangentlywrappedthegiftinbrownpaperandplacedtheparcelinReuben'shands.
8.Doraliftedthelid,tearsbeginningtoblurhervision.
9.Seeingnootherpeoplenoticeus,iplacedtheChristmaspresentdownandpoundedhisdoorbell.
10.Shedidn'tsayaword,butsmiledawaterysmileandheldmyhandtightly
英语续写优秀学生范文第4篇
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tomthoughtHenrymuststillbeanxiouswashethatheknockedatthedoorofHenry’sroomtom’sastonishment,HenrywasstilllyinginhiswasextremelyevidentthatHenrydidn’trealizehowseriousthesituationwithrage,tomshouted,“Getup!thereisabigmustworkrightnow.”Calmandpeaceful,Henryresponded,“Sir,haveyouforgottenitoldyouthatstormswouldn’tdisturboursleep?whynotjustgobacktosleep?”Hearingthewords,awidedisappointmenttookholdoftom.
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tomthoughthehadhiredthewronghelpless,herushedouttoworkonhissoonerhadhegoneoutsidethananunexpectedscenecameintohissight,alltheroofscoveredandallhischicken,horsesandcowswasseizedbyastrongsenseofrelief,tearsstreamingdownhiswasHenrythatdidalltheworkwellinadvancebeforethestormrealizedhehadhiredthebestman.
英语续写优秀学生范文第5篇
Directions:Forthispart,youareallowed30minutestowritealettertotheuniversitypresident.Youshouldwriteatleast120wordsbasedontheoutlinegivenbelowinChinese:
1.学校教学应该注重学生学习方法的\'培养。
2.学校应该丰富学生的校园生活
aLettertotheUniversitypresident
DearSir,
iamwritingtoputupsomesuggestionsconcerningourteachingandcampuslife.
asasophomorefromthemathDepartment,iamquitesatisfiedwiththepresentconditionofmyuniversity,buti餯liketosaythatthereisstillsomeroomforimprovement.
First,ibelievethatmoreattentionshouldbepaidtotheguidanceofourstudymethods.tosomeextent,universitystudentsarecapableofstudyingbythemselves,butmoreoftenthannever,wefindourselvesatalossastochoosegoodbookstoreadandappropriatetopicsforourresearch.itisclearthatweneedsomeadvicefromourteachers.ifourteacherscanlecturemoreonhowtolearnbyyourselfforus,especiallyforthefreshmen,ourskillswillbefurtherimproved.
Second,moreactivitiesshouldbeconductedtomakeourcampuslifemorecolorful.i餸sorrytosaythatthepresentlifeoncampusisquiteboring.everydaywehaveclasses,readinthelibrary,orstayinthedormitory.Lifehereisroutine.weneedmoremeaningfulactivitiesorganizedtoenrichourcollegelifeandenableustostudymoreefficiently.
英语续写优秀学生范文第6篇
①Heturnedtome,withhiseyesfullofhorror.他转过身来，眼里充满了恐惧。
②Fearslowlycreepsuponher.恐惧慢慢地蔓延到她身上。
③Shewasstruckwithhorrorwhen...她感到恐惧…
④Shewaschokedbyfear.她因恐惧而窒息。
⑤Herfaceturnedpaleandstoodtheretongue-tied.她脸色苍白地站在那里，舌头打结。
⑥afloodoffearwelledupinhim./Fearfloodedoverhim.他心中涌起一阵恐惧。/恐惧淹没了他。
⑦Herheartbeatsoviolentlythatshefeltnearlysuffocated（窒息）.她的心跳得厉害，几乎窒息而死。
⑧Sheshookallover,feelinglikesittingonpinsandneedles.她浑身颤抖，觉得如坐针毡。
英语续写优秀学生范文第7篇
①thesmileonherfaceshonelikeadiamond.她脸上的笑容像钻石一样闪闪发光。
②asmileofunderstandingflashedacrosshisface.他脸上露出了一种理解的微笑。
③arippleofexcitementranthroughthem.一阵激动声穿过他们。
④Laughterlingeredaroundtheroom.笑声在房间里萦绕。
⑤Hiseyestwinkledwithpleasure.他的眼睛闪烁着快乐。
⑥awildgaietytookholdofher.一种疯狂的快乐控制了她。
⑦Unforgettablewerehereyesthatshonelikediamondsandlipsheldinasteadysmile.令人难忘的是她的眼睛像钻石一样闪闪发光，嘴角保持着稳定的微笑。
⑧iwaswildwithjoy.我欣喜若狂。
⑨iwaspleasedbeyonddescription.我高兴得难以形容。
⑩Sheworeashiningsmileonherface.她脸上带着灿烂的笑容。
英语续写优秀学生范文第8篇
①toucheddeeply/immensely,we…被深深感动，我们…
②tearsfillinghereyes,sheofferedherheartfeltgratitude.她热泪盈眶，表示衷心的感谢。
③withtearsstreamingdownherface,she...泪水顺着她的脸颊流了下来，...
theimpactoftheinternetonthewaypeopleCommunicate
Duetothewideuseofputersandthedevelopmentofinternet,moreandmorepeopleliketochatontheinternet.wetendtopaymoreattentiontoelectronicmunicationthantoface-to-facecontact.
aselectronicmunicationisnotlimitedbyspace,wecanchatwithotherswherethereisinternetwithourtoolssuchasputers,mobilephonesandpads.However,whenwechatwithothersonline,wecannotexpressourfeelingsfully.Justasthepictureshows,theparentscannottouchorhugtheirchild.weknowthatbodylanguageplaysanimportantroleinour
munication,buttheelectronicmunicationcannotdothis.Forexample,whenwearesad,weneedmoreloveandwarmth,arealhugfromourparentsorfriendscanmeanmuchmoretousthanjustwordsthroughelectronicmunication.
therefore,thoughelectronicmunicationbringsconveniencetoourlife,istilldon?tthinktheelectronicmunicationcanreplaceface-to-facecontact.
1.通读全文，读懂原文
通读全文首先要解决好五个w和一个H的问题，即理清人物who、地点where、时间when、事件what、原因why及怎样发展how。
2.构思情节，谋篇布局
按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性，构思好情节发展，这个发展须符合情节内在的逻辑。因为这不是写科幻小说，不是写神话，因此应该符合现实发生的真实性。所以这个环节的主要任务是谋篇布局。布局谋篇最关键应利用好两方面的信息：十个标有下划线的关键词语。
英语续写优秀学生范文第9篇
读后续写的词汇得分点除了一般的名词、形容词、副词之外，最重要的是高级动词！因为续写侧重叙事，里面涉及到的人的动作是非常多的，比如cry，这就过于简单，要侧重细节描写，toshow,nottotell,高分作文一般就会写，withshouldersshivering,hertearscannothelpstreamingdownherface.她的双肩哆哆嗦嗦，眼泪情不自禁的从她脸上流下来。所以类似表现喜怒哀乐的情况，都要事先做好准备（注意，两三句即可，但这两三句一定要是最佳句，如句式，高级词汇都要是最好的，熟记于心，一直用即可），侧重刻画描写，脸，手，眼睛都可以描写。
英语续写优秀学生范文第10篇
①Hestoodsilently,tearsrollingdownhischeeks.他静静地站着，眼泪顺着面颊流了下来。
②ifeellikeiamfloatinginanoceanofsadness.我漂浮在悲伤的海洋里。
③Herhandswereshaking.Shewasonthevergeoftears.她的手在颤抖。她快要哭了。
④Hearingthenews,sodesperatewashethathedrownedsadnessinwine.听到这个消息，他绝望地把悲伤淹没在酒里。
⑤Sheburstintotearsandranoutoftheroom.她突然哭了起来，跑出了房间。
⑥Shesobbed,hidingherfaceinherhands.她掩面哭泣。
⑦itriedtofightbacktears./myeyeswerefilledwithtears.我努力忍住眼泪。/我的眼里充满了泪水。
⑧afrown（皱眉）nowstoodonhisface.他皱起了眉头。
⑨theysattherewithglumlooksontheirfaces.他们坐在那里，带着一脸忧郁。⑩thenewscastacloudofgloomoverhisface.这消息使他脸上蒙上了一层阴影。
英语续写优秀学生范文第11篇
虽说读后续写没有字数限制，但是考虑到字的大小与整体篇幅限制，一般两个波折即可，如事态变坏一个转折，最后事态好转一个转折即可。侧重人物矛盾与心理冲突，比如两人之间的猜忌，后重归于好，类似小学生作文。
mymotherisakindandgentlewoman.Sheisalwaysverygentle.Shetakesgoodcareofherchildrenandkeepsthemallatschool.
ihaveonebrotherandtwosistets.Soshegetsfourchildreninall.Shegivesuseverycomfort.
weallloveherandshelovesusalso.
mymotherhastoomuchtodoinbringingusup.
asourfamilyistoopoortokeepaservant,mymotherhasalwaystodoverymuchwork.
Shegetsupveryearlyandsleepsverylateeveryday.
Sheworkshard,yetwithoutisalsoathrifty,andindustriouswoman.
Shesaveseverycentthatshecanandkeepseverythinginorder.
asshehasbeenbusyeversinceshewasyoung,shelooksolderthanshereallyis.
Herfaceiswrinkled,herhairbecomessilverwhite,butsheworksashardasever.
oftenshesaystous,_workwhileyouwork,playwhileyouplay.
ifyoudonotwork,youwillbecomelazyandofnousetowhatpieceofgoodadvicethisis!wemustworthitwellandalwayskeepitinourmind.
onnewYear'seve，ourclasshadaparty.theatmospherewasgood.itwasoutoftheordinaryfromtheverybegining.theboystudentfromonebedroomgaveanunusualperformance.wesawaboynamedLiXinminturnoffallthelightsinasuddensnap.thenwiththreeresoundingcrowofacockechoinginthehall，thehallwasagainbrightlylitinasnap.
then，therepresentativeofthebedroomZhuGuozhangaskedustoguessalineofapoemrelatedtotheabovesituation.HeaddedthatLiXinminalonewasbornintheyearofthedogandtheotherthreewereallbornintheyearofthechicken.theyleftusallinconfusion.anditwasourmonitorwhowasquickwittedHeshoutedour，
_thedaybreaksasthecockcrowsthreetimesatthehallafterthat，theyhadanotheritem.thistimeLiXinminwasplacedinthemiddleofthecircle.whilehewasstandingthere，theotherthreestoodaroundhim，eachbowingdowntohimatanangleof120degrees.itwasanidiom.thistimeigotitright：_thedogstandsoutamongagroupof