英语续写作文野外遇到狼第1篇
inadistantcountry,therewasaboy.Helookedaftersheep.
Buttheboywasbored.
oneday,herantothevillage.Heshouted,"wolf,wolf.Comeandhelp!"
thepeoplerantothehill.
Buttherewasnowolf.thepeoplewenthome.
thenextday,theboywasboredagain.
Herantothevillageandshouted,"wolf,wolf.Help!"
thepeoplerantothefield.therewasnowolf.
thepeoplewenthome.theywereveryangry.
then,awolfcametothehill.
itwantedtoeatthesheep.
theboyrantothevillage.Butthepeopledidn'truntothehill.
theysaid,"Don'ttelllies."
thewolfateallthesheep.theboywasverysad.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第2篇
"wolves3,"theotherthereisabutchertianwanhome,wheretheburdenofthemeathasbeensoldout,leavingonlysomeofthebones.twowolvesencounterontheroad,followedcloselybyZoulehenyuan.afraidofthebutcher,pickupapieceofbonethrowninthepast.awolfboneshavebeenstopped,alongwithstillanotherwolf.Butcherandpickupapieceofbonethrowninthepast,thebonesafterthewolfcametoahalt,buttheboneshavebeenthefirstwolfYougenup.Boneshavebeenthrownover,theotogether,liketheoriginalasawolftocatchup.Butcherisdistress,iamafraidtogetherbeforeandaftertheattackbyawolf.therearewildtoseemichaelplayingagame,themastersofthefieldtostackfirewoodinthewheatfieldtofight,intoahill-likecoverage.SoBenbutcherinthepasttorelyonfirewoodpilebelow,pickupthebutcher'sknifetolaydowntheirburden.twowolvesareafraidtomoveonandstaretowardthebutcher.afterawhile,awolfstraightawayandtheotherasawolf-likedoginfrontofthesquat.alongtime,itseemstobeawolf'seyesclosed,lookingveryrelaxed.Butcherallofasuddenjump,withawolf'sheadDaopi,Liankanjidaotokillwolves.Butcherabouttostartnow,tofirewoodbehindapile,sawanotherwolfisfirewoodheapholes,drilledinthepastwanttobutcherinthebackoftheattack.thewolfhasgothalfofthebody,onlythebuttocksandtailexposed.Fromthebutchercutoffthebackofthehindlegsofthewolf,thewolfkill.Understandthisinfrontofthewolfpretendingtosleep,wasusedtoluretheenemy.wolfistoocunning,butforawhileowolveshavebeenhackedtodeath,theanimaldeceptiontohowmuch?onlygivethemincreasedhumor.《狼·三则》其二有个屠户天晚回家,担子里的肉已经卖完了,只剩下一些骨头。
路上遇到两只狼,紧随着走了很远。屠户害怕了,拿起一块骨头扔过去。
一只狼得到骨头停下了,另一只狼仍然跟着。屠户又拿起一块骨头扔过去,后得到骨头的那只狼停下了,可是先得到骨头的那只狼又跟上来。
骨头已经扔完了,两只狼像原来一样一起追赶。屠户很窘迫,恐怕前后一起受到狼的攻击。
看见野地里有一个打麦场,场主人把柴草堆在打麦场里,覆盖成小山似的。屠户于是奔过去倚靠在柴草堆下面,放下担子拿起屠刀。
两只狼都不敢向前,瞪眼朝着屠户。过了一会儿,一只狼径直走开,另一只狼像狗似的蹲坐在前面。
时间长了,那只狼的眼睛似乎闭上了,神情悠闲得很。屠户突然跳起来,用刀劈狼的脑袋,又连砍几刀把狼杀死。
屠户正要上路,转到柴草堆后面一看,只见另一只狼正在柴草堆里打洞,想要钻过去从背后对屠户进行攻击。狼的身子已经钻进一半,只有***和尾巴露在外面。
屠户从后面砍断了狼的后腿,也把狼杀死。这才明白前面的那只狼假装睡觉,原来是用来诱惑敌方的。
狼也太狡猾了,可是一会儿两只狼都被砍死,禽兽的欺骗手段能有多少呢?只不过给人增加笑料罢了。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第3篇
paragraph1:
thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.macjumpedoffhisbicycleandrushedtothedoorofthecar.Butbeforemaccouldopenthedoor,thewolfhadcaughtupandjumpedtoattack.Luckily,themagicspraysavedmacathirdtime.Seeingthewolfbackoff,paulquicklyunlockedthedoor,andthefrightenedmanclimbedintothecarinnotime,shuttingthedoorbehindhimheavily.Beckylookedoutofthebackwindowandsawthewolfstandingovermac’sbicycleasifitwereakill.Soonafter,theanimalranoff.
paragraph2:
afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.macgotoutofthecarandhuggedhisfriends.“itwasreallyanightmareandithoughtiwasgoingtodie,”saidmacinashakyvoice,tearsgatheringinhiseyes.Forhim,lifecouldneverbemorebeautiful.aftersayinggoodbyetopaulandBeckywithgratitude,thethreemencontinuedtheirtrip,agreeingnevertoseparateagain.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第4篇
onabright,warmJulyafternoon,macHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoalaskawithhisfriends.oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedmactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.asmacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.
thenmacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“man,that’sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.
mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtomac’srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.thenitattackedthebackofmac’sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追赶).
macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.
atthismoment,paulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoalaska.theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第5篇
aftertheyleft,igotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.insidethebagwasachickentaco.thenextfewminutessawmywolfingdownthedeliciousfood.tearswelledupasiwaschewing.itwasawesometoknowthatwhilemanypeopletendtoignorethoseinneed,therearesomekind-heartedoneswhogooutoftheirwaytolendahand.thegooddeedtheforeignfamilydidwillneverescapeme.iamgoingtopassitdowntocreateamuchfriendlierworld.(163)
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第6篇
amotHeR'SDaYSURpRiSe
thetwinswerefilledwithexcitementastheythoughtofthesurprisetheywereplanningformother'sDay.Howpleasedandproudmotherwouldbewhentheybroughtherbreakfastinbed.theyplannedtomakeFrenchtoastandchickenporridge.theyhadwatchedtheirmotherinthekitchen.therewasnothingtoit.JennaandJeffknewexactlywhattodo.
thebigdaycameatlast.thealarmrangat6.thepairwentdownthestairsquietlytothekitchen.theydecidedtoboiltheporridgefirst.theyputsomericeintoapotofwaterandleftittoboilwhiletheymadetheFrenchtoast.Jeffbroketwoeggsintoaplateandaddedinsomemilk.Jemafoundthebreadandputtwoslicesintotheeggmixture.next,Jefturnedonthesecondstoveburnertoheatupthefryingpan.everythingwasgoingsmoothlyuntilJeffstartedfryingthebread.thepanwastoohotandthebreadturnedblackwithinseconds.Jennathrewtheburntpieceintothesinkandputintheothersliceofbread.thistime,sheturneddownthefiresoitcookednicely.
thenJeffnoticedsteamshootingoutofthepotandthelidstartingtoshake.thenextminute,theporridgeboiledoverandputoutthefire.Jennapanicked.thankfully,Jeffstayedcalmandturnedoffthegasquickly.Butthestovewasamessnow.JennatoldJeftocleanitupsotheycouldcontinuetocooktherestoftheporridge.ButJeff'shandtouchedthehotburnerandhegaveacryofpain.Jennamadehimputhishandincoldwater.thenshecaughtthesmellofburning.ohdear!thepieceofbreadinthepanhadturnedblackaswell.
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右:
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第7篇
iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.
paragraph1:
thepaydayarrivedatlast.iwasgladthatifinallygotthepaymentafterworkinghardfortwoweeks.whilewalkingbackhomewithanexcitedmind.iconceivedmanyplansabouthowtodisposeofit.ineededanewfootballbecausetheoldoneweplayedhadalreadywornout.iintendedtopurchasemyfavoritechocolates.Uponapproachingthehouse,inoticedmydadandmomstandingbesidetheoldtruck,lookingsadly.itseemedasifsomethingunpleasanthappened.“Howmuchdowestillneedtopayforanewtruck?".askedmymother.threehundreddollars,butwejusthadtwohundredleft.”
paragraph2:
iunderstoodimmediatelywhatmyparentswereworriedabout.Really,thetruckmydaddroveoftenbrokedownontheway,whichmademydadintrouble.myparentshadintendedtobuyanewtruckbutcouldn'taffordit.Suddenly,irealizedwhatishoulddo.Steppingforward,isaid,“Dad,hereiswhatireceivedformywork.ithinkitwouldhelpyoualittle.”alittlesurprisedatwhatisaid,mymomhuggedmetightly.thatnight,beforeiwenttobed,lthoughtiwouldtellthefarmerthenextdaythatiwouldcontinuemywork,afteralllgrewup.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第8篇
awolfhadbeenbadlywoundedbylaysickandmaimedinhislair.Hefeltveryhungryandthirsty.
whenasheeppassedby,heaskedhimtofetchsomewaterfromthestream.“ifyoubringmethewater,”hesaid,“iwillfindmeanstogetsomefood.”
“Yes,”saidthesheep,“ifibringyouwater,youwouldbecomemyfoodwithoutdoubt.”
狼被狗所咬,伤势很严重。他卧病在床,在巢穴里苟延残喘。他感到又饿又渴。
一只羊路过,他便请求羊到附近的小河里为他取一点水来。“你给我一点水解渴,”他说,“我就能想出办法去获取食物了。”
“是呀,”羊回答说,“如果我给你送水喝,那么毫无疑问我就会成为你的食物。”
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第9篇
"mrDongguoandthewolf'isaninterestingfablethatlhavefablesaid,onedayawolfaskedmrDongguo,asoft-heartedman,tohelphim,becauseahunterwasrunningafterhimandwantedtokillDongguohidthewolfinabagandtoldthehunterhesawthehunterleft,mrDongguosetthewolfwolf,however,returnedgoodfortoldmrDongguothathewashun-gry,andhewasgoingtoeatmrDongguoclevermancamebyandaskedthewolf,“thebagisverysmallandyouareverycanyougetintothebag?"thewolfwantedtoshowthebagwasbigenoughforhim,sohegotintoitattwomentiedthebagupimmediatelyandkilledthewolf.
thestoryshowsthatpeopleshouldlearntotellevilfromgood.
《东郭先生和狼》是我读过的一篇很有意思的寓言。寓言上讲:有一天,一只狼向心地善良的东郭先生请求帮助。因为有一位猎人正在后面追捕他,而且想杀死他。于是,东郭先生就让狼钻进了二个袋子并告诉猎人他什么也没有看见。等猎人离开后,东郭先生放出了狼。但是,狼恢复了他本来的凶残面目,他对东郭先生说,他现在很饿,要吃了东郭先生。幸运的是,一位聪明的人经过此地,他对狼说:“口袋这么小”,你的身体是那么大,怎么可能钻进去呢?“狼想展示袋子大的足够装下他,于是再次钻了进去。这两个人马上扎紧了口袋并杀死了狼。
这个故事告诉人们应该学会辨明真伪。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第10篇
保护狼protectingthewolves在人们眼里,狼似乎是种很可怕的动物,但其实,每种动物的存在都为生态平衡做出了自己的贡献~现在狼也存在捕杀严重的问题~我们应该呼吁保护狼~animalsarepeople'sfriendssoweshouldprotectthem.wolveslookliketheyhavesharpcanhelpwitheacheatssnailandtheyhaveverygoodeyesight,hearingand***ell,theyneverattackpeople.ifhunterscatchwolve,theywillkillitforitsfurandsharpfamerscutdowntreesandforests,wolveswillhavenowheretotheyhavenofoodtoweshouldtoprotectwhatcanwedo?wecantakethefollowingactionstoprotectwolves:wecanplantmanytrees,encouragefamerstoleavesthewolves,thenwecanwritetonewspapersandmagazinesaboutthethinkmanypeopledonotunderstandtheimportanceofthehopethisimformationwillhelpthemunderstandandmakethemactivelytakeactionstoprotectwolvesifwedonothing,soontherewillbenowolvesintheworld!。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第11篇
oneweekendinJuly,Janeandherhusband,tom,haddriventhreehourstocampovernightbyalakeintheforest.Unfortunately,onthewayanunpleasantsubjectcameupandtheystartedtoquarrel.Bythetimetheyreachedthelake,Janewassoangrythatshesaidtotom.“i'mgoingtofindabetterspotforustocamp"andwalkedaway.
withnopathtofollow,Janejustwalkedonforquitealongtime.aftershehadclimbedtoahighplace.sheturnedaround,hopingtoseethelake.tohersurprise,shesawnothingbutforestand,farbeyond,asnowcappedmountaintop.Shesuddenlyrealizedthatshewaslost.
“tom!"shecried."Help!"
noreply.ifonlyshehadnotlefthermobilephoneinthatbagwithtom.Janekeptmoving,butthefarthershewalked,themoreconfusedshebecame.asnightwasbeginningtofall,Janewassotiredthatshehadtostopforthenight.Lyingawakeinthedark,Janewantedverymuchtobewithtomandherfamily.Shewantedtoholdhimandtellhimhowmuchshelovedhim.
Janeroseatthebreakofday,hungryandthirsty.Shecouldhearwatertrickling(滴落)somewhereatadistance.Quicklyshefollowedthesoundtoastream.tohergreatjoy,shealsosawsomeberrybushes.Shedrankandateafewberries.neverinherlifehadshetastedanythingbetter.Feelingstrongernow.Janebegantowalkalongthestreamandhopeitwouldleadhertothelake.
asshepickedherwaycarefullyalongthestream,Janeheardahelicopter.isthatforme?Unfortunately,thetreesmadeitimpossibleforpeopletoseeherfromabove.afewminuteslater,anotherhelicopterflewoverhead.Janetookoffheryellowblouse,thinkingthatsheshouldgotoanopenareaandflagthemiftheycamebackagain.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文文中标有下划线的关键词语:
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第12篇
thewolforiginatedinthenewworld,aboutfivemillionyearsago.inhumanflourishing,thewolfwastheworld'smostwidelydistributedwildanimal.widelydistributedineurope,asia,theamericas,thewolfrecordsinnorthamericaalonehasreached23.inthewesternfolklegend,thewolfisoftendescribedasthelazycheatsandanimal.infact,thewolffamilylifethanmosthumans,theyaremoreloyalandconscientious.thisseeminglycunningcreaturesareonthevergeofextinction,letusprotectthem.。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第13篇
到目前为止,已经有许多省份在高考英语中开始了对读后续写的考查。下面我们以2017年6月浙江省高考真题为例,一起来分析一下读后续写的考查重点。
阅读下面的短文,根据所给情节进行续写,使之构成一个完整的故事。
onabright,warmJulyafternoon,macHollan,aprimaryschoolteacher,wascyclingfromhishometoalaskawithhisfriends.oneofhisfriendshadstoppedtomakeabicyclerepair,buttheyhadencouragedmactocarryon,andtheywouldcatchupwithhimsoon.asmacpedaled(骑行)alongalone,hethoughtfondlyofhiswifeandtwoyoungdaughtersathome.Hehopedtoshowthemthisbeautifulplacesomeday.
thenmacheardquickandloudbreathingbehindhim.“man,that’sabigdog!”hethought.Butwhenhelookedtotheside,hesawinstantlythatitwasn’tadogatall,butawolf,quicklycatchingupwithhim.
mac’sheartjumped.Hefoundouthiscanofbearspray.withonehandonthebars,hefiredthesprayatthewolf.abrightredcloudenvelopedtheanimal,andtomac’srelief,itfellback,shakingitshead.Butaminutelater,itwasbyhissideagain.thenitattackedthebackofmac’sbike,tearingopenhistentbag.Hefiredatthewolfasecondtime,andagain,itfellbackonlytoquicklyrestartthechase(追赶).
macwaspedalinghardnow.Hewavedandyelledatpassingcarsbutwascarefulnottoslowdown.Hesawasteepuphillclimbbeforehim.Heknewthatoncehehitthehill,he’dbeeasycaughtupandthewolf’steethwouldbetearingintohisflesh.
atthismoment,paulandBeckyweredrivingtheircarontheirwaytoalaska.theydidn’tthinkmuchofitwhentheysawtwocyclistsrepairingtheirbikeonthesideoftheroad.abitlater,theyspottedwhatthey,too,assumedwasadogrunningalongsideamanonabike.astheygotcloser,theyrealizedthatthedogwasawolf.macheardalargevehiclebehindhim.Hepulledinfrontofitasthewolfwascatchingupfast,justadozenyardsawaynow.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.应使用5个以上短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
paragraph1:
thecarabruptlystoppedinfrontofhim.
paragraph2:
afewminuteslater,theothertwocyclistsarrived.
从2017年浙江省高考真题中我们可以发现,读后续写的考试形式与教育部考试中心颁布的《普通高等学校招生全国统一考试英语科考试说明》(高考综合改革试验省份试用)中的描述相同,提供了一段350词以内的语言材料(体裁多以记叙文为主),故事没有结束但是留有线索,让考生得以缘写文章。题目要求考生根据已经给出的故事信息,结合已经写好的两个开头语,应用材料中5个以上标有下划线的关键词语,完成一篇约150词的作文(150词不包括已给出的两段的开头语)。
读后续写不是让考生毫无依据地编故事,而是要求考生在读懂原文的基础上,找到原文给出的线索,然后用丰富、准确的语言完成一篇与原文紧密结合的读后续写作文。总体来说,
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第14篇
wolfisahighlygregariouspackofwolvesaroundthenumberbetween5-12inthewinterwhenthecoldupto40orso,usuallyinfamilyunits,afamilywolfbyapairofdualleadershipstrengths,butwithotherscallforagroupofbrothersandsisterswolfledthestrongestareterritorial,andusuallyarealsothescopeoftheiractivities,iftheincreaseinthenumberofindividualswithinpopulations,tonarrowthescopeofthedonotoverlapbetweenthescopeofthefield,willbehowlingsoundofthescopeoftheothergroupswolftogrow,itwillremaininthegrouptakingcareofyoungersiblings,itmayinheritthedominantpositionwithinthegroup,andsomewillbemovedoutof(mostlymalewolf)whiletherearesomecases,migratorywolveswillappear,toagroupof100progenitor,fromdifferentfamilylevelsofvarioustypesofwolves,eachsmallgroupwillbecomethefirstformerheadofthewolfwolfwolfofthemostoutstandingwillbecomealongwolvesgenerallylive12-16years,andsomewolvesincaptivitycanliveuptotwentyfast,upto55kilometersorso,durabilityisalsohavetheabilitytospeedof10km/h(6miles)longrun,andareabletouptonearly65km/hspeed(40miles)huntedwithhoundsitislong-distancerunning,itwillexceedthespeedofhigh,youcansmell,soundstowolfisameat-basedomnivorousanimals,isthefoodchaininaverycriticalone.。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第15篇
mydad,George,onlyhadaneighthgradeeducation.aquietman,hedidn'tunderstandmyworldofschoolactivities.Fromage14,heworked.andhisdad,albert,tookthemoneymydadearnedandusedittopayfamilyexpenses.
ididn'treallyunderstandhisworldeither:Hewasalivestocktrucker,andlthoughtthatiwouldsurpass(超过)anythinghehadaccomplishedbythetimelwalkedacrossthestageathighschoolgraduation.
Summersinthemid,70swerespentathomeshootingbaskets,hittingabaseball,orthrowingafootball,preparingformyfutureasaquarterbackonafootballteam.inpoorweather,ireadaboutsportsorpracticedmytrombone(长号).
thesummerbeforemyeighthgradeiwasoneofagroupofboysthataneighboringfarmerhiredtoworkinhisfield.Heexplainedourbasictask,thetractorfiredupandwewereoff,ridingdownthefieldlookingforweedstospraywithchemicals.afterashortway,thefarmerstoppedandpaintedataweedwhichwemissed.thenwebeganagain.thishappenedoverandover,butwesoonlearnedtoidentifydifferentgrasseslikecockleburs,lamb's-quarters,foxtails,andthekingofweeds,theprettypurplethistle.itwastiringwork,butilookedforwardtothepay,eventhoughiwasn'tsurehowmuchitwouldamountto.
athome,mydadsaid,"ajob'sabigsteptogrowingup.i'mgladyouwillbecontributingtothehousehold."mydad'swordsmademerealizethatmyearningmightnotbeminetodowithaswished.
mylaborslastedabouttwoweeks,andthefarmersaidtheremightbemorework,butiwasn'tinterested.idecideditwasnotfairthatlhadtocontributemymoney.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第16篇
thewolfisatthetopofthepyramidofbiologicallifeforms,inmanyplayanimportantroleinthefoodchain,theysharesomeoftheirbiologicalsystemsbio-energyminimum,buttheroleitcannotbeignored.
wehavetoprotectwolves,becauseifwekillwolves,itwoulddamagedtheecologicalliketheenergypyramid,iftheprimaryconsumersdiedoff,thesecondaryandterritaryconsumerswouldalldie,also.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第17篇
"everybodyknowssympathypatheticsheepsheep,whoknowsthelonelywolf,wolfsadsheepcangrazehungry,hungrywolvesshouldstarveyou"?idonotrememberthissentenceistheonewhosayscelebrity,ijustrememberthesewords,rememberthatthereasonisbecauseitdemonstratedtotheresent,iseemtohaveheardthecriesofinjusticefacedwithalltheworld-------ilovewolves,wolfworship,perhapsbecauseiwasadog,andthewolfisacloserelativeofthereason,itisinmymindtotem.icollectedalotofwolfpictures,puzzles,pictures,novels,butalsoacollectionofsomeofthevelvetcloth,ceramic,claymodelingwolf,andrelatedvideoandsoon.ilikethewolfpersonality.Dogsandwolvesarecloserelatives,dogsbeefedpetwolfbeeconstantlyguard,broughtfrightenchildrenencountercertainlykilltheevilbeasts.more"eastGuoandwolf"idiomsandvocabularyofaclassactincollusion.inhumaneyes,becausethewolfisinsidious,cunning,cruel,dangeroussymbol.wagobediencetohumansparedwithdogs,wolves'mstubbornbeforeGodandsaid:oursoulsandhumansareequal.wolfhumanssaidfirmly:no!Becausewolvessought"equalsoul"becauseofitshumanitysaid"no"!Soitwaskillingpeopleanddemonize.ihavesomestubborninnatureandfirm,iactednotsoobedient***ooth,ioftenself-righteouspeoplewouldsay:no!Soinevitablythesamefatewiththewolvesmorehardshipsandfrustrations.peopleinthisworld,nomatterhowhischaracter,morefivingsurface,virtuallynoonelikeswhatotherssay"no."althougholder,charactersomechange,butmyheartstillupholdmyintegrityandperseverance.ilikethewolftenacious.Becausehumanscannot,thewolfhastosurviveinharshenvironments.ithasaharshnaturalenvironmentandastrongabilitytoadaptandsurvive.naturedoesnotchange,donotchangeChixineffortstosurviveandreproducesound.wepursueacareerinthepursuitoftheidealprocess,mostofthetimeisintroublestruggle,struggle,struggle,whichisboundtogothroughtheprocesssuccessful.intimesofhardshipwemaywishtowolvestolearnfromitstenacious.ilikethewolfsimplededication.weimaginethat,inthevastdrydesert,awolftrackaperson.peopleinordertoescapetheexhaustionofallthestrengthandenergy,withastrongdesiretoliveandfeartrekforward,mymindwilloccasionallythoughtofhisparents,brother,wife,kids,awarmhomeandfeastingcity.wolftrackswithwhichpeople,itisonlyanidea,whatpeopleeat.wolfnobodythoughtmuch,butnobody'sconcern,thereforethewolfoutofthedesert,butfewpeopleoutofthedesert.ilikethewolfalert.inlinetoseesuchanoldhuntertellstories."ashe-wolfwithacoyotecrossingtheriver,howtodoit?ifonlyacoyote,sheputhiminhismouth.ifseveralonly,shedonottrustonewithonlythepast,afraidoftheirownintheriverswimwhenchildrenstayontheshorewouldhappen,sothewolfkilledbyananimal,thatanimal'sstomachtoblowenoughair,andthentheteethfirmlystationedatthepedicle,lethimplumplikearaft,sheputallthecoyotesbearonthebody,bythatlifebuoybuoyancy,thefamilyacrosstheriver.onceihuntwithodearbabyofashe-wolf,sheranfast,becausecoyotesarenothealthylegmuscles.Distancebeeenmeandthewolfgraduallyshortened,wolfmotherturnedtoahugesandduneclimbing.iwassurprisedwhenthewolfisusuallycritical,lushplaceincircles,bytheplexterrain,waitingtoescape,ifclimbedSharper,althoughwolfclimbfasterthanpeopleseemtotakeadvantageof,butwhoonceclimbedthehill,ontheListdemonstrated,thewolfwillnolongerstandit.thisisastrangewolf,maybeshegotdizzy.ithought,aslide-stepclimbupthetalldunes.Reallyseeclearly,quicklyfledthewolfinthedistance.idownhillchase,suddenlyfoundcoyotesdisappeared,thengavemorethought,desperatelychasedown.thatisthefastestihaveeverseethewolf,idonotknowwhereshewasingfromsomucheffort,asclosetothelandofablackarrow.Catchthesungoesdown,itwillkillher.itooktokillthewolvesgoback.walkedthink,isreallyanincrediblewolf,whysheissotabooit?thatocoyotesgoout?isuddenlysawahiddendepression,likeawhitecandleasleisurelyo***okerising.iranoverandsawalotofdriedcameldung,fromwhichwhitegasareingout.igentlyclawedcameldung,disappearedduringthedaytoseetheocoyotes,pantingunderuniformiswarmcameldung.wolftailgentlysweepthegroundwithtracesofdryvery。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第18篇
withallherbigbrothersandsistersofftoschool,ourranchbecamealonelyplaceforourthree-year-olddaughter,becky。shelongedforplaymates。cattleandhorsesweretoobigtocuddleandfarmmachinerydangerousforachildsosmall。wepromisedtobuyherapuppybutinthemeantime,“pretend”puppiespoppedupnearlyeveryday。
ihadjustfinishedwashingthelunchdisheswhenthescreendoorslammedandbeckyrushedin,cheeksflushedwithexcitement。“mama!”shecried,“comeseemynewdoggy!igavehimwatertwotimesalready。he’ssothirsty!”
isighed,anotherofbecky’simaginarydogs。
哥哥姐姐都去上学以后,对我们三岁的女儿贝基来说,农场就成为一个寂寞的地方了。她渴望伙伴。牛马太大了,她无法抱在怀里。农业机械对这么小的孩子也太危险。我们答应给她买个宠物,不过同时,“虚构”的宠物每天都会出现。
我刚洗完午饭的盘子,纱窗门就砰地被撞开,贝基跑了进来,兴奋地满脸通红。“妈妈!”她叫着,“快来看看我的新狗狗!我已经喂他两次水了,他都快渴死了!”
我叹息了一声,又是一只贝基虚构的小狗。
“pleasecome,mama。”shetuggedatmyjeans,herbrowneyespleading,“he’scrying—andhecan’twalk!”
“can’twalk?”nowthatwasatwist。allherpreviousmake-believedogscoulddomarvelousthings。onebalancedaballontheendofitsnose。anotherdugaholethatwentallthewaythroughtheearthandfelloutonastarontheotherside。
stillanotherdancedonatightrope。whysuddenlyadogthatcouldn’twalk?
“allright,honey,”isaid。bythetimeitriedtofollowher,beckyhadalreadydisappearedintothemesquite。
“whereareyou?”icalled。
“overherebytheoakstump。hurry,mama!”
“来呀,妈妈。”她使劲拖着我的牛仔裤,棕色的眼睛里透出乞求的眼神。“他一直在叫——他还不会走路呢!”
“不会走路?”这倒是一个预想不到的变化。她以前编造的狗狗都会做令人惊异的事情。其中一只会在鼻尖上平稳地顶着一个球不让它掉下来,另一只挖洞穿越了地球,从另一端掉到星球上去了,还有一只在能在钢丝上跳舞。怎么突然有了一只不会走路的.狗狗呢?
“好吧,宝贝。”我说。还来不及跟上她呢,贝基就已经消失在豆科灌木丛中了。
“你在哪儿啊?”我喊道。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第19篇
wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.itwasafantastictrip.wecrossedbigriversandvastplains,climbedhighmountains,andoverlookeddeepvalleys.Duringthetrip,mom’sbeingabsent-mindednotonlygotusintomuchtrouble,butalsogaveusmanyfunnymoments.Butluckily,shewasnotsoforgetfulastoleavemeandDavidbehindinthegasstationbathrooms.weallarrivedatgrandparents’homesafeandsound.(续写词数147)
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第20篇
thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.toourdelight,momgaveuptheideaofcampinginsomestranger’sbackyard.instead,wefoundawonderfulcampingsiteinthewild.itwasaclearinginthewoodsbyasmalllake,whereDadcouldcatchsomefishfordinner.wehadnotroublesettingupourtent,butweweredisappointedtofindthatmomforgottopackuppillows.needlesstosay,weallwokeupwithasoreneckthenextmorning.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第21篇
在进行读后续写时有以下几点需要考生注意∶
①重在描述
读后续写的重点在于情节描述。描述过程中应加入更多的具体动作和情感描写,用具体动作代模地名表达。同学们往往比较擅长写"结论性"语言,例如"S…"样的句子虽然在语法上没有错误,但是且按用形容词来表达会导致续写只呈现抽象的结论,而没有"画面械"、不会给读者留下深刻的印象。所以,同"们在进行读后续写时,一定要注重描述,讲究生动和画面感。本书第二章中为大家提供了一些用来描述情绪和动作的高频词(短语),希望大家能学以致用。
②关注语言
在高考英语写作中,考生所采用的句型结构在一定程度上会影响阅卷老师对考生写作水平的判断。考生尤其应该避免句型单一化、如通篇使用定语从句,因为这样会让阅卷老师觉得考生对各种句型掌握得不够充分。考生在进行读后续写时应该有意识地多使用不同的句型结构和语法点,比如非谓语、形容词作状语、虚拟语气等。本书第三章中对这些相关语法点进行了讲解。
③注意衔接
由于阅卷老师的阅卷时间十分有限,所以考生一定要在作文中使用清晰的逻辑衔接词,这样可以帮助老师快速抓住文章结构,促使老师更好地理解文章主旨,同时也可以显示出考生写作时严谨的逻辑。在读后续写当中,时间线索串联最为重要,例如uponone'sarrival、then、however、besides、while等衔接词,能够为文章提供明确的时间线索,很好地承接上下文,同学们在日常学习中应该多多积累。
④正向结局
对于读后续写这样的写作题型,同学们平时一定要多积累好词好句,进行大量的句子翻译练习,并且找到合适的写作步骤,这样才能在考场上有限的时间内完成一篇高分作文。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第22篇
awolfwasalmostdeadwithhunger.ahouse-dogsawhim,andasked,"Friend,yourirregularlifewillsoonruinyou."whydon'tyouworksteadilyasido,andgetyourfoodregularly?"一只狼快要饿死了,一只狗看见后问他:“你现在的无规律的生活一定会毁掉你,为什么不像我一样稳定地干活并有规律地获得食物呢?”
"iwouldhavenoobjection,"saidthewolf,"ificouldonlygetaplace.""iwillhelpyou,"saidthedog."Comewithmetomymaster,andyoushallsharemywork."狼说:“如果我有个地方住,我没有意见。”狗回答说:“跟我到主人那里去,我们一起工作。”
Sothewolfandthedogwenttothetowntogether.于是狼和狗一起回到了村子。
onthewaythewolfsawthattherewasnohairaroundthedog'sfeltquitesurprised,andaskedhimwhyitwaslikethat?在路上,狼注意到狗的脖子上有一圈没有毛,他很奇怪地问为什么会那样。
"oh,itisnothing,"saidthedog."everynightmymasterputsacollararoundmyneckandchainsmeup.Youwillsoongetusedtoit."“噢,没有什么,”狗说,“我的主人每天晚上都用一条铁链子拴住我,你很快就会习惯的。”
"isthattheonlyreason?"saidthewolf."thengood-byetoyou,myfriend.iwouldratherbefree."“就是因为这个原因吗?”狼说道,“那么,再见了,我的朋友,我宁愿选择自由。”
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第23篇
wedrovethroughseveralstatesandsawlotsofgreatsightsalongtheway.oneday,towardsevening,wefoundagreatcampingsiteatthefootofahighmountain.DavidandihelpedDadputupthetent,andmomwasbusypreparingsupper.whenthesettingsuncastanorangelightoverthemountains,thetentwassetupandthemealwasready.Sittingaroundthecampfire,wetalkedandlaughed.everytimewementionedthefunnyincidentsofthejourneyapleasantsmilewouldspreadovermom’sface.(续写词数163)
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第24篇
wheniwasabouttosaygoodbye,thegirlaskedifi’dhadlunch.ishookmyheadandsaidno,wonderingwhysheaskedsuchaquestion—wasshegoingtotreatmetolunchorsomething?“waitaminute,”saidthegirl,andthenshewentbacktothetruck.afterafewminutesshecamebackwithapaperbag.“Herearesomemexicansnacksandyoucanhavesomewhenyouarehungry,”thegirlsmiled.iwassosurprisedandtouchedthatwordsalmostfailedme.ijustsaida“wow!”insteadofa“thankyou!”whenitookthebag.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第25篇
阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。
themeredithfamilylivedinasmallcommunity.astheeconomywasindecline,somepeopleinthetownhadlosttheirjobs.manyoftheirfamilieswerestrugglingtomakeendsmeet.peopleweretryingtohelpeachothermeetthechallenges.
mrs.meredithwasamostkindandthoughtfulwoman.Shespentagreatdealoftimevisitingthepoor.Sheknewtheyhadproblems,andtheyneededallkindsofhelp.whenshehadtime,shewouldbringfoodandmedicinetothem.
onemorningshetoldherchildrenaboutafamilyshehadvisitedthedaybefore.therewasamansickinbed,hiswife,whotookcareofhimandcouldnotgoouttowork,andtheirlittleboy.thelittleboy—hisnamewasBernard—hadinterestedherverymuch.
“iwishyoucouldseehim,”shesaidtoherownchildren,John,Harry,andClara.“Heissuchahelptohismother.Hewantsverymuchtoearnsomemoney,butidon’tseewhathecando.”
aftertheirmotherlefttheroom,thechildrensatthinkingaboutBernard.“iwishwecouldhelphimtoearnmoney,”saidClara.“Hisfamilyissufferingsomuch.”
“Sodoi,”saidHarry.“wereallyshoulddosomethingtoassistthem.”
Forsomemoments,Johnsaidnothing,but,suddenly,hesprangtohisfeetandcried,“ihaveagreatidea!ihaveasolutionthatwecanallhelpaccomplish(完成).”
theotherchildrenalsojumpedupallattention.whenJohnhadanidea,itwassuretobeagoodone.“itellyouwhatwecando,”saidJohn.“YouknowthatbigboxofcornUncleJohnsentus?well,wecanmakepopcorn(爆米花),andputitintopaperbags,andBernardcantakeitaroundtothehousesandsellit.”
注意:
1.续写词数应为150左右;
2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第26篇
thisday,thegraywolfwasrushedtocatchthesheepwithhiswife'sredwolf.nowaytorantothegreengrasslandswaitingfortheappearanceofpleasantGoat.afterawhile,hefoundthattheywereplayinginagrasslandinthedistance,sohequietlyfollowed.whenthegraywolfapproachedthegrassaroundthepleasantGoat,thegraywolfslammed,whileshouting:"Sheep,iamcomingagain!"Sheep,theyfirstshocked,butsuddenlyauniformityFlashingonbothsides,thegraywolfcametoahungry,butsuddenlyhititonthetree,andthedizzinesspassed!whenthegraywolfwokeup,thecasewassenttothewolfofthewoolensheep.whentheRedtarodiscoveredthatthegraywolfwasbackandreturned,itwaspreparedtolearnthegraywolf,thegraywolfshouted:"Slow!"Said:"wife!Youdon'tthinkthiscatchingthesheepisveryspent,timemada?"theredwolfissurprised,andtheevilasked:"it'snotlikethistocatchit?isthereaway?"theBigBigwolfsaidthathesaid:"Don'tlookatme!"Don'tlookatme!"Don'tlookatme!iamalsoanoblewolf!ialreadyhaveaway!"Redwolfasked:"Hey?""ihaveinvented!"Saidthegraywolfproud,"isitnotpopularnow?ihavealotofinventions!"thegraywolfandtheRedtaroaredry,andimmediatelyputthegraywolfaslongasanyanimal'shaircanclonethe"supercloningmachine"ofthisanimaltoapplyforapatent.Somemerchantsheardthenewstosignthecontractwiththegraywolf,andthegraywolfisbusy!Butthehardshipwillreturn-amillioncash!BigBigwolfisgettingafortune,andiboughtavillaimmediately!Redwolfwearsgoldinfrontofsisters,verybeautiful!naturallyalotofgraywolves!BigBigwolfdoesn'thavetocatchsheepeveryday!everyday,youwillsendgreenlamb!thatsentenceistrue:"Don'ttakethetimewithoutspending!"oneday,thegraywolfopenedhisBmw730tofindbusinessopportunitiesonthestreet,thegraywolfisworthyofgraywolf!"Hefoundmanypeopleonthestreettocleanthebillboards,whichisverydangerous!Hehasaninvention"elongatedshorteningmachine",whichissittinginsidetocleanthebillboard!ifyoudon'thavetodry,thegraywolfhasfinallysuccessfullyinventedthe"elongationshortage"!Heappliedforpatentsandwascommentedonthe"Bestpracticalprize!"Bonusisacash!inthisway,thegraywolfhasbecomeamillionairefromthemillionaire!pleasantgoats,theyarestupid,andtheywantto"usuallythisisstupid.thebreezeisamillionaire."BigBigwolfisnotaverybadperson!whatkindofcharityiswhat,heiswillingtotakethemoneytodonate!andhealsoopenedBugattiweihangtoconductcharityspeechestohelpthedisasterareaandbuildhopes.whenthebirdjournalistaskedtheBigBigwolfsuccessfully,hereplied:"infact,thisishard!Happylifeiseverywhere,aslongasyouworkhardtofindit!Justlikeme,thelittlefatsheepissomuch,whyisitnecessary?Greengrassland?"maybeyouwillthinkthatiamchildish,maybeyouwillthinkthatthisstoryispurelyfiction,maybeyouwillthinkthatthereisnomeaning!nomatterwhatyousaid,irememberthissentence."Happylifeislongasyouworkhardtofindit!"
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第27篇
我没记错的话,八年级英语书上有呢吧,我自己随便写一个吧tigersareindangernow,fewerandfewertigersarealiveallovertheareinoftenkillthemfortheirbonesandskin,also,humansalwayscutdowntrees,asaresult,tigersdonthavehomesnow.inordertosavetigers,weshouldtakesomeactions.cutdownfewertrees,buildnewhomesfortigers.ifwedothese,theworldwillbebettertolive.。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第28篇
原文:
aShepherd-boy,whotendedhisflocknotfarfromavillage,usedtoamusehimselfattimesincryingout"wolf!wolf!"twiceorthricehistricksucceeded.thewholevillagecamerunningouttohisassistancewhenallthereturntheygotwastobelaughedatfortheirpains.atlastonedaythewolfcameindeed.theboycriedoutinearnest.Buthisneighbors,supposinghimtobeathisoldsport,paidnoheedtohiscries,andthewolfdevouredthesheep.Sotheboylearned,whenitwastoolate,thatliarsarenotbelievedevenwhentheytellthetruth.
译文:
一个放羊的孩子在离村子不远的地方放羊。他为了开心寻乐常喊:"狼来了!狼来了!"他的恶作剧有两三次达到了目的。全村的人都跑来帮忙,而他们所得到的回报却是一顿嘲笑,白费了心力。最后,有一天狼真的来了。这个孩子认真地大喊起来。但是他的邻人们却以为他又在耍把戏,谁都不理会他的喊叫,于是狼把羊吃了。因此这牧童得到了教训:爱说谎的人,甚至在他说真话的时候,也没人相信他,但是他知道得太晚了。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第29篇
thereisabutchertianwanhome,wheretheburdenofthemeathasbeensoldout,leavingonlysomeofthebones.twowolvesencounterontheroad,followedcloselybyZoulehenyuan.
afraidofthebutcher,pickupapieceofbonethrowninthepast.awolfboneshavebeenstopped,alongwithstillanotherwolf.Butcherandpickupapieceofbonethrowninthepast,thebonesafterthewolfcametoahalt,buttheboneshavebeenthefirstwolfYougenup.Boneshavebeenthrownover,thetwotogether,liketheoriginalasawolftocatchup.
Butcherisdistress,iamafraidtogetherbeforeandaftertheattackbyawolf.therearewildtoseemichaelplayingagame,themastersofthefieldtostackfirewoodinthewheatfieldtofight,intoahill-likecoverage.SoBenbutcherinthepasttorelyonfirewoodpilebelow,pickupthebutcher'sknifetolaydowntheirburden.twowolvesareafraidtomoveonandstaretowardthebutcher.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第30篇
itwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.
优秀范文
Butnomorehelicopterscameanditwasgettingdarkagain.immediately,anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest.Jane,exhaustedandscared,laydownnearastone,missingherfamilyatadistance.allthefantasticmemorycrowdedinandshecouldn'thelpcrying,"Hadn'tiquarreledwithtom,walkedawayandclimbedtothehighplace,iwouldn'tbetrappedinthisawfulplace,confrontedwiththedangerofdying."Sheregrettedwithendlessanxiety,andthenbecameasleepwithshiningtearsinhereyes.
itwasdaybreakwhenJanewokeup.weakasshewas,shestruggledtoherfeet,continuingsearchingforassistance.tohergreatjoy,ahelicopterwasflyingoverheadagainandagain.eagerandexcited,sheflaggedheryellowblouseandsparednoefforttoyellsoastoattractothers'attention.Fortunately,shewaseventuallynoticedandbroughtintothehelicopter.there,shesawherhusband,amanstaringather,wearinganexpressionofrelief.astightlyaspossible,shehuggedhimandwastoothrilledtosayanything.Besides,theyagreednevertoquarrelagain,determiningtolivethelifetothefullest.
【解析】
首先,在逻辑上,要做到了合理合情:起初,主人公身陷森林,内心充满了悔恨,在面对困难时焦虑、畏惧;之后,主人公努力求生,最终获救,并且领悟到了一定的人生道理。纵观整个故事,情节发展不仅符合两段给出的开头所限定的情景要求,而且还设置了一定的悬念,增强了故事的可读性。
文章第一句"anabsolutedarknessruledtheforest"中,"rule"一词就使用了拟人的修辞手法,让森林阴森黑暗的一面展露无遗,同时描绘出主人公身处绝境的紧迫性。在"eagerandexcited,sheflaggedheryellowblouse…"一句中,直接将情绪形容词放在句首,使用了非谓语动词的语法,表达精练。
此外,"there,shesawherhusband,amanstaringather,wearinganexpressionofrelief."一句中,使用了几个短句,却包含了两处非谓语动词语法,同时活用了"wear"一词,把两个人相见时的场景生动地描绘了出来。
【词汇拓展】
1)表示并列关系的过渡词:and,aswellas,or,notonly…butalso
2)表示转折关系的过渡词:but,yet,however,although,though…
3)表示时间关系的过渡词:first,second,third,andthen,finally,after,before,afterafewdays,atlast,atthattime,later,inthepast,immediately,inthemeanwhile,when,while,then,afterthat…
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第31篇
Suddenlyalittlerabbitjumpedoutinfrontofmyhorse.Dadandifounditwassocutethatwedecidedtochaseit.afterawhile,wewerecompletelylostintheforest.therewasnothingleftinoursightbutthetrees.“wemaynotbeabletomakeitbacktothefarmhouseintimeforsupper.”ithoughttomyself.afteraseriesoffruitlessattemptstofindawayout,wefelthungryandtired.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第32篇
aftertheyleft,igotintomyJeepandopenedthepaperbag.whenisawwhatwasinthebag,iwasovercomewithamixtureofrespectandgratefulness.inadditiontothesnacks,therewasthe$20bill.whatakindandrespectablefamily!theyareaperfectexampleofwhatkindnessreallymeans.andi’msureiwillpayitforward.(145)
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第33篇
wolfhadbeenbadlywoundedbydogs.Helaysickandmaimedinhislair.Hefeltveryhungryandthirsty.whenasheeppassedby,heaskedhimtofetchsomewaterfromthestream."ifyoubringmethewater,"hesaid,"iwillfindmeanstogetsomefood.""Yes,"saidthesheep,"ifibringyouwater,youwouldundoutlybecomemyfood.
狼和羊的故事
狼和羊狼被狗所咬,伤势很严重,痛苦地躺在巢穴里,不能外出觅食他感到又饿又渴,这时,他看见一只羊,便请求他到附近的小河里为他取一点水来。“你给我一点水解渴”,他说,“我就能自己去寻找食物了。”“是呀”,羊回答说,“如果我给你送水喝,那么我就会成为你的食物。”
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第34篇
—与所提供短文和开头语的衔接较差。
—产出内容太少,很少使用短文中标出的关键词语。
—语法结构单调,词汇项目很有限,有较多语法结构和词汇方面的错误,严重影响了意义的表达。
—缺乏语句间的连接成分,全文内容不连贯。
白卷、内容太少无法评判或所写内容与所提供内容无关。
(1)评分原则
满分25分。提供一段350词左右的语言材料,要求考生依据该材料内容、所给段落开头语和所标示关键词进行续写(150词左右),将其发展成一篇与给定材料有逻辑衔接、情节和结构完整的短文。
1.本题总分为25分,按5个档次给分。
2.评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量、确定或调整档次,最后给分。
3.词数少于130的,从总分中减去2分。
5.拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6.如书写较差以致影响交际,可将分数降低一个档次。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第35篇
itwassummer,andmydadwantedtotreatmetoavacationlikeneverbefore.Hedecidedtotakemeonatriptothewildwest.
wetookaplanetoalbuquerque,abigcityinthestateofnewmexico.wereachedalbuquerqueinthelateafternoon.Unclepaul,mydad’sfriend,pickedusupfromtheairportanddroveusuptohisfarminpecos.
HiswifetinacookedusadeliciousdinnerandwegottoknowhissonsRyanandKyle.mydadandispentthenightintheguestroomofthefarmhouselisteningtothefrogsandwaterrollingdowntherivernearby.Veryearlyinthemorning.Unclepaulwokeusuptohavebreakfast.“thedaystartsatdawnonmyfarm,”hesaid.afterbreakfast,iwenttohelpaunttinafeedthechickens,whilemydadwentwithUnclepaultotakethesheepouttograze(吃草).iwasimpressedtoseemydadandUnclepaulridinghorses.theylookedreallycool.
intheafternoon,iaskedUnclepaulificouldtakeahorseride,andhesaidyes,aslongasmydadwentwithme.iwasn’tgoingtotakeahorseridebymyselfanyway.So,mydadandiputonournewcowboyhats,gotonourhorses,andheadedslowlytowardsthemountains.“Don’tbelateforsupper,”Unclepaulcried,“andkeeptothetracksothatyoudon’tgetlost!”“oK!”mydadcriedback.afterawhileUnclepaulandhisfarmhousewereoutofsight.itwassopeacefulandquietandthecolorsofthebrownrocks,thedeepgreenpinetrees,andthelateafternoonsunmixedtocreateamagicscene.itlookedlikeabeautifulwoven(编织的)blanketspreadoutuponthegroundjustforus.
注意:
1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右;
2.至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语;
3.续写部分分为两段,每段的开头语已为你写好;
4.续写完成后,请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第36篇
thenextdaywerememberedthebrand-newtentwehadbroughtwithus.Butthenwewerehalfanhourawayfromthehotel,wherethetentwasleftbehind.Dadrecommendedbuyinganewone,whilemominsistedonourgoingbacktofetchit,saying“Forgetfulpeoplelikememaylosethingsrepeatedly,soit’sunwisetogiveupthetent.”Finally,wegotbackthetentandhittheroadagain.ifmomhadn’tbeenthatabsent-minded,itwouldhavesavedusthetroubleofgoingbackagainandagain.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第37篇
thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.
参考答案:
paragraph1:
asthetwinslookedaroundthemindisappointment,theirfatherappeared.
“Don’tpanic!”hehandedeachoneawettowel,helpingthemcleanthemessquickly.afterthat,Jeffstammeredouttheirplan,hisfaceflushing.However,Fatherlaughed,“Soundsgreat!icanteachyoutocook.”atthis,JennaandJefalmostjumpedtotheirfeet,joyineyes.Underhiscarefulguidance,itdidn’ttakelongbeforetheFrenchtoastandchickenporridgewereready.everythingsettled,Fatherleftthekitchen,promisingtokeeptheirsecret.
paragraph2:
thetwinscarriedthebreakfastupstairsandwoketheirmotherup.
meetingtheirsmilingeyes,motherfeltconfuseduntiltheypresentedthebreakfastandsaid“Happymother’sDay”.mothergavethematighthug,“Unbelievable!Youcancook!it’sthebiggestsurpriseihavereceived.”Herfacelitupwithhappiness.“theyhaveknownhowtotakecareofothers.”Fathersaidinresponsetoherexcitement,winkingatJennaandJef.theycouldn’thelpgiggling.itwasasecretonlysharedbetweenthem.(150words)
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第38篇
Sometimeswejustfinditdifficulttodistinguishbewteenwolfandaresimilartoarefromthesamecanadapttodifferentcouldmakealivinginmoutains,forests,grassland,evenChinawolvesmainlyspreadinthefeedonmeat.
theyalwaysgohuntingatnightandinarecrulesometimeswhentheyarehungrytheycanattackhumanweshouldprotectwolvesbecausetheyareapartofnature.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第39篇
"读后续写"是高考英语中新增加的一种写作题型,从2016年开始应用于高考综合改革试点省份的高考中、并且将随着高考综合改革试点的推广在全国范围内使用。在将来,越来越多的学生将会在高考英语中遇到读后续写这种题型。在开始学习如何进行读后续写之前,让我们先来了解一下读后续写这类写作题型的具体要求。
要求考生在理解一篇不完整文章的基础上,充分调动想象创新思维,大胆预测文章缺失部分的内容走势,进行充满个性色彩的设计,并用英语进行续写表达。所提供短文词数在350左右,划线词语涉及到名词(词组)、动词(词组)、介词(词组)和形容词等,其中,以名词(词组)为主,在续写中至少要使用5个关键词语,需要注意:在使用关键词语时根据时态和语态的需要,可以改变动词的形式,可以改变名词的单复数,但不要改变关键词语在原文中的含义和词性;多以记叙文故事类文章或者夹叙夹议类文章为主,故事情节有曲折、有起伏,但故事线索的逻辑性比较强。
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第40篇
wehadnoideawherewewereanditwasgettingdark.wegotstuckintheforest.andanunexpectedshoweraddedtothedifficultyofusinfindingawayhome,forallthetrackswehadmadedisappearedbecauseoftherain.iwasalmostontheedgeofbreakingdownwhenmyfathersaid,“Don’tworry,myson.irememberthereisarivernearthefarmhouse.Findtheriverandwewillbebackhome.”Finally,wefoundtheriverandgotbacktothehousealongit.needlesstosay,weatealatedinner.
英语续写作文野外遇到狼第41篇
有一次,一群狼见到了一只小羊,小羊心里很害怕但表面上不害怕个样子。故作镇定说:“虽然你们是羊的天敌,但我就是不怕你,有本事就跳起来捉我。”狼们没有上当,说:“我知道你想拖延时间,我就不上你的当。”说着还是犹豫了片刻。
once,agroupofwolvessawalamb.thelambwasafraidinhisheart,buthedidn'tlookafraidonthesurface.pretendingtobecalm,hesaid,"althoughyouarethenaturalenemyofsheep,iamnotafraidofyou.ifihavetheability,iwilljumpupandcatchme."thewolvesdidn'tfallforitandsaid,"iknowyouwanttodelay,iwon'tfallforit."Saidorhesitatedforamoment.
羊听后,又生一计,大声说道:“我知道你们跳得没我高,还想吃我,哈哈,你们不觉得惭愧吗?”狼听了,十分气怒地说:“跳就跳。”说着就跳了起来。
afterhearingthis,thesheepmadeanotherplanandsaidloudly,"iknowyouarenotastallasiam.Youwanttoeatme.Haha,don'tyoufeelashamed?"thewolflistenedandsaidangrily,"jumpandjump."andhejumpedup.
羊趁这个机会,逃出了狼的包围圈。
thesheeptooktheopportunitytoescapefromthewolf'sencirclement.