剑桥雅思考官范文第1篇
为了方便广大考生更好的复习,综合整理了雅思口语实用攻略:考前如何调整状态,以供各位考生考试复习参考,希望对考生复习有所帮助。
雅思口语考试历来是中国考生最担心的一关,虽然时间短,但是考核的时候要面对面,这无疑会产生紧张的心理。以下是名师总结的在雅思口语考试中一些考生常会提及到的问题,包括雅思口语考试的高分技巧,希望这些总结能对大家的复习有所帮助。
一、虽然雅思口语考试在听说读写四项中是最短的,只有10-15分钟,但是很多中国考生依然经常把它看成最大的障碍。主要原因是什么?
答复:大部分考生在口语考试里面临着如下问题:
1.心理过度紧张,缺乏自信。
有些考生性格内向,不善交流和表达,面对临煞有介事的考官会大脑短路,语无伦次。
2.英文能力有限,准备压力大。
07年以来雅思口语新话题层出不穷,考官第三部分的谈论愈发灵活,如果考生不懂得将话题化繁为简归类总结,会感到复习范围无边无际,从而忐忑不安。
3.错把口试当成背诵考试,适得其反。
很多考生会把口语预测话题写成段子死背硬记,结果考试时不懂得与考官交流,只管猛背答案,往往是答非所问,难逃低分命运。
话题:thechartbelowshowsthetotalnumberofminutes(inbillions)oftelephonecallsintheUK,dividedintothreecategories,from1995-2002.
提纲:
introduction:rewritethequestionstatementinyourownwords.
overview:pointoutwhichcategorywashighestineachyear,whichwaslowest,andwhichsawthebiggestchanges.
Details:comparethe3categoriesin1995,thensaywhathappenedupuntil1999.
Details:noticewhathappenedtolocalcallsfrom1999onwards,andcontrastthiswiththeother2categories.Finishwithacomparisonofthefiguresin2002.
范文:
thebarchartcomparestheamountoftimespentbypeopleintheUKonthreedifferenttypesofphonecallbetween1995and2002.
itisclearthatcallsmadevialocal,fixedlineswerethemostpopulartype,intermsofoverallusage,throughouttheperiodshown.thelowestfiguresonthechartareformobilecalls,butthiscategoryalsosawthemostdramaticincreaseinuserminutes.
in1995,peopleintheUKusedfixedlinesforatotalofjustover70billionminutesforlocalcalls,andabouthalfofthatamountoftimefornationalorinternationalcalls.Bycontrast,mobilephoneswereonlyusedforaround4billionminutes.overthefollowingfouryears,thefiguresforallthreetypesofphonecallincreasedsteadily.
By1999,theamountoftimespentonlocalcallsusinglandlineshadreachedapeakat90billionminutes.Subsequently,thefigureforthiscategoryfell,buttheriseintheothertwotypesofphonecallcontinued.in2002,thenumberofminutesofnational/internationallandlinecallspassed60billion,whilethefigureformobilesrosetoaround45billionminutes.
isnotrestrictedto…,butisalsoevidentamong…某一现象并不仅仅局限于…,而是在…中也很明显
beeconomicallyindependent经济上独立
recognition认知,可以替换argue,believe等词用来表示人的观点
earnaliving谋生
havepersonalresourcestodrawon用自己的资源可以依靠
taketimeoff休息
endup最终…
academicqualifications学术资质
essentialadj.必要的,必需的
reasonablecareer还行的职业
broadentheirhorizons扩展他们的视野
getaclearperspective获得清晰的认知
第一段:复述文章主题+引出论点典型的大作文文章开篇,中规中矩,不失为实战中最好用也是最稳妥的写法。
词汇学习:onthefaceofsth.从表面看
句子学习:文中:itistruethatmanyparentspurchaseamultitudeofplaythingsfortheiroffspring.“purchaseamultitude”-可用来直接替换三俗词”havedifferentviewstowards”用法完全一致。
另文中:whetherornotthisisagoodthingforthechild,isamootpoint.“moot”一次解释为有争议的,悬而未决的。此处用法可以完美替代通俗句型whether…,iswidelydebated.
第二段:主题句+理由分析此写法常见于各类考官范文,主题句直接清晰的点明此段论述主题,然后围绕此主题进行展开。玩具有助于孩子身体,智力的发展同时兼具教育意义
相关词句学习:optimumbraindevelopment开发大脑
hand-eyecoordination眼手协调
colourrecognition颜色识别
sth.isdesignedtobeeducationalaswellasfun寓教于乐
speedchildren’sacquisitionofnumbersorthealphabet加速孩子对数字和字母的认知
第三段:主题句+理由分析此段结构同第二段,依旧是常见的正文段写作结构。而且从篇幅上看此段为考官的立场所在,玩具的弊大于利。所以笔者在此在此强调,一般双边分析的文章建议大家以第三段来奠定文章基调。
理由整理:spoiltheirchildren宠坏孩子
concentrationspanmaysuffer集中力下降
toomanytemptingobjects诱惑太多
becometargetsofenvyfromclassmates被妒忌
bedangerousforinfantstosuckonoringest有误事的风险
词汇学习:multiple许多,可替换“many”
detrimental有害的,可替换“harmful”
pitfall缺点,可替换“drawback”
beperceivedas被认为,可替换“beregardas”
句子学习:文中:Forone,wealthyparentsmightspoiltheirsonordaughterbyshoweringhim/herwithtoys,resultinginanegativeeffectonthechild’scharacter.句中考官形象的使用了shower一次写出了给孩子提供了大量的玩具。showersb.withsth.可替换“givesb.alargenumberof…”,同时考官用了resultingin一词的非谓语结构引导结果。此写法笔者在前几期的文章中反复强调的重点句型。
第四段:陈述观点。
句子学习:itisclearthenthatthissituationisnotasstraightforwardasitfirstappears.此句几乎可以算是万能句,表示情况并不如看起来那么简单。几乎可以用于各种雅思与论文中。
以上就是小站老师为雅思考生们带来剑桥雅思10G类写作考官范文解析,希望能给雅思考生们带来帮助,不过雅思写作的唯一提升方法就是多写哦。
Describeashopyouliketogoto.
whatshopitis
whatitsells(or,whatyouusuallybuythere)
whenyoufirststartedgoingtothisshop(or,howyoucametoknowaboutthisshop)
andexplainwhyyoulike(togoto)thisshop.
前考官范文:
well,ittookmeafewmomentstodecideonwhichshoptotalkabout,becauseiactuallylikegoingtoquiteanumberofdifferentshopsaroundmyhometown,butpossiblymyfavouriteisH&m,sothat'stheonei'mgonnadescribe.
Firstlythen,withregardtowhatitsells,welli'mnotsureifyou'refamiliarwithH&m,butit'sbasicallyamid-endclothesshopwhichsellsavarietyofwomen'sandmen'sclothing,mostlygearedtowardsyoungadultslikemyself.andaswellasclothing,theshopalsohasasmallaccessoriessectionforwomen,withthingslikehairbands,braceletsandearrings,butthemainfocusisdefinitelyonclothes.
anyway,asforwhenifirststartedgoingtothisshop,welltobetotallyhonestwithyou,i'mreallynotthatsure,butoffthetopofmyhead,iguessimusthavefirststartedshoppingtheretwoorthreeyearsago,roundaboutthetimeiwasinhighschool,becauseiseemtovaguelyrememberoneofmyhigh-schoolclassmatestellingmeaboutit,andhowgooditwas.
Sothat'skindofhowigottoknowaboutH&m,andfinally,regardingwhyilikeshoppingthere,wellisupposeit'sreallyacombinationofreasons,oneofwhichwouldbethattheclothesthere,onthewhole,tendtobequitefashionableandtrendy,unlikethestuffiseeinmanyothershops,andtheclothesareprettysimpleinstyle,whichisexactlywhatilike.Sothat'sonething,andiguessanotherreasonwouldbethateverythingthereisreallygood-value,andjusttogiveyouanexample,adecentpairofjeanstherecostsaroundthreehundredyuan,whereasasimilarpairatanothershopwouldprobablysetyoubackathousandyuanorso,andintermsofquality,well,there'sreallynotthatmuchdifferencebetweenH&m'sclothesandthehigher-endbrands,butyou'repayingconsiderablyless.
Soyeah,iwouldsaytheseare,moreorless,themainreasonswhyilikeshoppingthere,andiwouldprobablygosofarassayingit'sbecomeoneofthemostpopularclothesshopshereinmyhometown,andijusthopetheycontinuetokeeptheirpricesaslowastheyare!
that'sprettymuchitthen,sothanksforlistening.
题目:Somepeoplethinkthatstrictpunishmentsfordrivingoffencesarethekeytoreducingtrafficaccidents.others,however,believethatothermeasureswouldbemoreeffectiveinimprovingroadsafety.Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
考官范文:
peoplehavedifferingviewswithregardtothequestionofhowtomakeourroadssafer.inmyview,bothpunishmentsandarangeofothermeasurescanbeusedtogethertopromotebetterdrivinghabits.
ontheonehand,strictpunishmentscancertainlyhelptoencouragepeopletodrivemoresafely.penaltiesfordangerousdriverscanactasadeterrent,meaningthatpeopleavoidrepeatingthesameoffence.therearevarioustypesofdrivingpenalty,suchassmallfines,licencesuspension,driverawarenesscourses,andevenprisonsentences.theaimofthesepunishmentsistoshowdangerousdriversthattheiractionshavenegativeconsequences.asaresult,wewouldhopethatdriversbecomemoredisciplinedandalert,andthattheyfollowtherulesmorecarefully.
ontheotherhand,ibelievethatsafedrivingcanbepromotedinseveraldifferentwaysthatdo
notpunishdrivers.Firstly,itisvitallyimportanttoeducatepeopleproperlybeforetheystarttodrive,andthiscouldbedoneinschoolsorevenaspartofanextendedormoredifficultdrivingtest.Secondly,moreattentioncouldbepaidtosaferoaddesign.Forexample,signscanbeusedtowarnpeople,speedbumpsandroadbendscanbeaddedtocalmtraffic,andspeedcamerascanhelptodeterpeoplefromdrivingtooquickly.Finally,governmentsorlocalcouncilscouldreduceroadaccidentsbyinvestinginbetterpublictransport,whichwouldmeanthatfewerpeoplewouldneedtotravelbycar.
inconclusion,whilepunishmentscanhelptopreventbaddriving,ibelievethatotherroadsafetymeasuresshouldalsobeintroduced.
是的,所有剑桥后面的考官范文都是雅思写作最好的作文范本
范文如下:happinessisverydifficulttodefine,becauseitmeanssomanydifferentthingstodifferentsomepeoplelinkhappinesstowealthandmaterialsuccess,othersthinkitliesinemotionsandlovingpersonalothersthinkthatspiritualpaths,ratherthaneitherthematerialworldorrelationshipswithpeople,aretheonlywaytotruepeopleinterprethappinessforthemselvesinsomanydifferenways,itisdifficulttogiveanydefinitionthatisturefortherearedifferentkindsofhappinessfordifferentindividualsthenthefirststepinachievingitwouldbetohaveadegreeofpersonneedstoknowwhoheorsheisbeforebeingabletoknowwhatitisthatmakeshimorhercourse,factorssuchaslovingrelationships,goodhealth,theskilltoearnalivingandapeacefulenvironmentallcontributetoourhappinessthisdoesnotmeanthatpeoplewithouttheseconditionscannotbethinkanabilitytokeepclearperspectivesinlifeisamoreessentialfactorinachievingthatimeananabilitytohaveaclearsenseofwhatisimportantinourlives(thewelfareofourfamilies,thequalityofourrelationships,makingotherpeoplehappy,etc.)andwhatisnot(aproblematwork,gettingannoyedabouttrivialthings,etc.).全是手工输入的哦,希望对你有所帮助
Describeyourfirstmobilephone.
Youshouldsay:
whenyougotit
Howyougotit
whatyouuseditfor
andexplainhowyoufeltwhenyougotit.
考官参考范文:
okrightthen,i’mgonnatellyoualittlebitaboutmyfirstmobilephone,oratleastasmuchasicanrememberanyway,becauseithinkitwasaboutsevenoreightyearsagowhenifirstgotone,somymemory’sabitsketchy.
anyway,intermsofhowicametogettingmyfirstmobile,wellbasically,ihadkindofbeengoingonatmymumforquiteawhiletogetmeone,butshekeptsaying,quiterightly,thatiwastooyounganddidn’treallyneedone.Butwhenihittheageofabout15,ithinkitwas,shefinallyrelented,andtookmetotheshopstochooseone.
Souh,yeah,irememberatthetimethatneitherofusknewmuchaboutmobiles,sowhenwewalkedintotheshop,wejustaskedthesalesassistanttheretorecommendusone.andithinki’mrightinsayingthatweendedupchoosingthecheapestandmostbasicphonetheyhad,simplybecauseiwasn’treallyinterestedinhavingloadsoffunctions,youknow,alliwantedtouseitforwastocallandtextpeople.
Sothat’showgotiit,andum…whatelseistheretosay,uh….ohyeah,asforhowifeltwhenigotit,well,inactualfact,ididn’tfeeloverlyexcitedoranything,youknow,itwasreallyjustafeelingof,um…what’stheword,umm…..iguessyoucouldsayitwaslike,um,astrongersenseofindependencethatifelt,um,aswellasgratitudetomymum,ofcourse,forgivingittome!
anditookprettygoodcareofit,youknow,ievenspent,like,200rmbonaleathercasetogoaroundit,anditlastedaprettylongtime.ithinkiuseditforsomethinglike3orfouryearsbeforemovingontoabetterone.andithinki’vestillgotitstoredinadrawersomewhereathome.Souh,yeahthat’sit.thanksforlistening.
剑桥雅思考官范文第2篇
Youshouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.
Yourheighbourshaverecentlywrittentoyoutocomplainaboutthenoisefromyourhouselflat.
writealettertoyourneighbours.inyourletter
thereasonsforthenoise
whatactionyouwilltake
DearJames,
iwasveryshockedtogetyourlettersayingthatthenoisefrommyflathasbeenspoilingyoureveningsandcausingyousomedistress.iamreally,reallysorryaboutthat.ihadnoideathatyouwouldbeabletohearsomuch,soihopeyouwillacceptmyapologies.
asyoumayhaveguessed,iamtryingtorefitmykitchenintheeveningswhenigethomefromwork.Unfortunatelyitisallgettinglongerthanexpectedandihavebeenhavingproblemswithgettingthingstofitproperly.thishasmeanttoalotofbangingandhammering.
asthekitchenisstillnotfinished,ihavedecidedtocallinaprofessionalbuilderwhowillfinishtheworkinthenextdayortwo.He'llworkonlyduringdaytimehours,soyouwon'tbedisturbedintheeveningsagain,ipromis.
Sorrytohavecausedtheseproblems,
Bill.
剑桥雅思考官范文第3篇
这段只有一句话,对剩下的agedcouple和singleagedperson进行表述。该句的内容和段2中句1的很像,也是先说总的情况,再对其中的两部分内容进行横向比较。但所用的词句是不一样的,这个句子是复合句,从句是让步状语从句。
句子拆解:
olderpeople=agedcouple+singleagedperson,weregenerallylesslikelytobepoor表述这个群体在图表中的特点;though从句的内容对agedcouple和singleagedperson进行比较。要注意的是,这里的onceagain体现了和上段的关系.thetrendfavoured这里使用了trend这个一般在动态图中出现的单词,需要注意。
这部分句式结构:thetrendfavoured...(数据)ratherthan...(数据).
考官范文·结尾段:总结数据
overallthetablesuggeststhathouseholdsofsingleadultsandthosewithchildrenweremorelikelytobelivinginpovertythanthoseconsistingofcouples.
结尾段解析
剑桥雅思考官范文第4篇
task:Somepeoplebelievethattheincreasinguseofthecomputersandthemobilephoneshasanegativeeffectonyoungpeople’sreadingandwritingskill,doyouagreeordisagree?
Sampleanswer:
Someeducatorshavewarnedthattheprevalenceofmobilephonesandtheinternethasanegativeeffectonadolescents’academicability.iagreewiththisview.
Firstly,thewideuseof“internetenglish”isregardedastheculpritofthedecliningwritingskills.oneobviousreasonisthatyoungadultsmaymakesomegrammaticalmistakesunconsciouslybecauseofthefrequentuseofimproperabbreviationsandpunctuationonmobiledevices,andthismightposeathreattotheirfuturecareerwhereaprofessionalwritingabilityisrequiredinmostcompanies.therefore,manylinguistshaveexpressedtheirconcernsthattheinstantmessagingandchattingonmobilephonesmightharmtheabilityofusingformalwrittenenglish.
Secondly,thepoorreadingproficiencycanbeputdowntothefrequentuseoftechnologiesaswell.Comparedtotheoldergeneration,youngpeopletodayareclutteredwithdifferentgadgets,likeipadandiphone.Forinstance,witheasyaccesstowifi,theycansurftheinternetanywhereandanytimetofollowthelatestinformationoftheiridolsinanothercountry.However,mostsocialnetworkdeliverfragmentanduselessinformation,whichnotonlystealstimewayfromsolitaryreadingbutalsounderminetheabilitytothinkindependently.inmyopinion,thisphenomenonshouldbereversedassoonaspossiblebecausereadinghasaprofoundeffectonanation’sfuture.
inconclusion,whiletheseelectronicdevicesmakethecommunicationmuchmoreconvenient,iaminthecampthattheymightaffectyoungpeople’sacademicperformancenegatively.
好,以下是官方提供的高分范文,逐段分析,给各位烤鸭看看,到底雅思高分作文长什么模样?
,childrenhavebegunstudyingforeignlanguagesatsecondaryschool,butintroducingthemearlierisrecommendedbysomeeducationalists.thispolicyhasbeenadoptedbysomeeducationalauthoritiesorindividualschools,withbothpositiveandnegativeoutcomes.
剑桥雅思考官范文第5篇
Discussboththeseviewsandgiveyourownopinion.
therelativeimportanceofnaturaltalentandtrainingisafrequenttopicofdiscussionwhenpeopletrytoexplaindifferentlevelsofabilityin,forexample,sport,artormusic.
obviously,educationsystemsarebasedonthebeliefthatallchildrencaneffectivelybetaughttoacquiredifferentskills,includingthoseassociatedwithsport,artormusic.Sofromourownschoolexperience,wecanfindplentyofevidencetosupporttheviewthatachildcanacquiretheseskillswithcontinuedteachingandguidedpractice.
However,somepeoplebelievethatinnatetalentiswhatdifferentiatesapersonwhohasbeentrainedtoplayasportoraninstrument,fromthosewhobecomegoodplayers.inotherwords,thereismoretotheskillthantoalearnedtechnique,andthisextratalentcannotbetaught,nomatterhowgoodtheteacherorhowfrequentachildpractices.
ipersonallythinkthatsomepeopledohavetalentsthatareprobablyinheritedviatheirgenes.Suchtalentscangiveindividualsafacilityforcertainskillsthatallowthemtoexcel,whilemorehard-wokringstudentsnevermanagetoreachacomparablelevel.But,aswithallquestionsofnatureversusnurture,theyarenotmutuallyexclusive.Goodmusiciansorartistsandexceptionalsportsstarhaveprobablysucceededbecauseofbothgoodtrainingandnaturaltalent.withthenaturaltalent,continuoustrainingwouldbeneitherattractivenorproductive,andwithoutthetraining,thechildwouldnotlearnhowtoexploitanddeveloptheirtalent.
inconclusion,iagreethatanychildcanbetaughtparticularskills,buttobereallygoodinareassuchasmusic,artorsport,thensomenaturaltalentisrequired.
thesubjectsandlessoncontentsaredecidedbytheauthoritiessuchasthegovernment.Somepeoplearguethatteachersshouldmakethechoice.towhatextentdoyouagreeordisagree?
ithaslongbeenarguedamidthecommunity:whichonecountsmore,authorityoracademy?notwithstandingthefactthatourcurrentpedagogyissomuchclingingtothecentralcommittee,theeducationalsystemisinablockbusteramountofoutcryforreform.Doesthetemporarysystemstillembracerationality?orisittheripejuncturetorefurnishitoutandout?ipersonallytookadeeplookinit.
intheshowdownbetweenauthorityandacademy,theformerarguablyoutweighsthelatter.politicsisacompulsorycourseinallkindsofenrollmentexaminationsaswellasalllevelsofeducationalinstitutions.thegovernment,oracommander-in-chieftobevivid,needstobeheldaccountableforthestabilityofsociety.educationisbyallmeansanalmightytooltoincubateabehavinggeneration.withsocialdevelopmentgainingmomentum,afarsightedpowerbasegenerallywithabroaderscopethantheindividuals,needstobuildupparticularmajorsspecializinginfledglingdomainsinvolvingcleaningenergy,high-techinnovation,interpretation,tonamebutafew.trainedpersonnelinsuchfieldsareusuallymorefitintothesociety.
argumentsbeingarticulatedabovethough,academy-orientedteachingmethodologyissofarstillreputedforitsownmerits.withteachersgainingmoresaysinselectingknowledge,thestudentswillpresumablybeinculcatedwithamoreobjectiveperceptionofthecurriculum.withoutauthoritybargingin,thepossibilityoftheimpartialitybeingjeopardizedisexcludedforthemissionofservingtheregimeisnolongervalid.onlyundersuchcircumstancecantheintrinsicvalueofthesubjectbeauthenticallyandmanifestedtothethirstylearnersinanuntangledmanner.anuntarnishedandpristineacademicambianceiscolossallydemandingbynumerouspunditsforthesakeofequityandtruth.
tosumup,there'snosuchinceptionthatisappropriatetobedubbed"Sheerright"or"starklywrong".therighteousonesolelyliesintherationalityofadaptingit.authority,inChina'scase,canneverbeanoutlinestandingbythesideofacademiccircleowingtoitsuniquenationalcondition
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剑桥雅思考官范文第6篇
nowadaysmanyadultshavefull-timejobsandtheproportionoftheirlivesspentdoingsuchjobsisveryhigh.Sofeelingsaboutone'sjobmustreflecthowanindividualfeelsabouthisorherlifeasawhole,andbecauseofthis,jobsatisfactionisindeedveryimportantforthewellbeingofthatperson.
employeesgetjobsatisfactioninanumberofways.Firstly,apersonneedstofeelthattheyaredoingvaluedandvaluablework,sopositivefeedbackfromsuperiorisveryimportantinhisrespect.asenseoffulfillmentisalsoencouragedifaworkerfeelsthejobisworthdoingbecauseitcontributestothesocietyortheeconomyasawhole.Secondly,whensomeonefeelstheyareimprovingordevelopingtheirskillsthroughtrainingopportunities,forexample,thenthereisasenseofprogressandpurposethatrewardsaworker.thesenseofbelongingtoateamoraworkingcommunityalsocontributestojobsatisfactionbecausecolleagueshelpeachothertoenjoytheirworkinglives.Satisfactionisalsoincreasedbyasenseofresponsibilityfortheloyaltoateam.
ofcoursenoteveryoneenjoystheirwork.Hardeconomicrealitiesmeanthatmanypeoplehavelittlechoiceinthekindofjobtheycanget.insomecasesanemployeesisworkinginajobthatsuitsneithertheirskillsnortheirpersonality.Somejobsarerepetitiveandboring,andlaborrelationsmaybepoorandleadtoresentmentandinsecurityratherthantojobsatisfaction.
However,eventhoughitisunlikelythatallworkersdofeelhappyintheirwork,ithinkitisnotunrealistictopromotemorejobsatisfactioninanyjob.ifthefactorsidentifiedaboveimplemented,thenanyjobcanbeimprovedandmoreworkerscanfeelgreaterdegreesofjobsatisfaction.
剑桥雅思考官范文第7篇
itiscommonnowadaysforpeopletomovetoanewcountryasimmigrantstoseeknewopportunitiesforworkortogetmarried.Fornewimmigrants,oneofthemajorissuesistowhatextenttheyshouldacceptthelocalcultureastheirown.whileitisimportantforthenewcomerstofollowthelocalrulesandconventioninordertoadapttothenewenvironmentandstarttheirnewlives,ibelievethatitisbeneficialtoboththeimmigrantsandtheirhostcountriesifthenewmembersbringintheirowncultureandlifestyleforthesakeofculturaldiversity.
tobeginwith,newimmigrantswouldmakemoresmoothtransitiontotheirnewlifeiftheyunderstandhowthesocietyoftheirhostcountriesworksandbehaveaccordingly.toconsiderasimpleexample,whenanamericanmovestoengland,shewillhavetodriveontheleftsideoftheroadfollowingtheenglishcustoms.otherwise,shewillimmediatelyfindherselfeitherinasevereaccidentorinjailforbreakingthetrafficlaws.Bythesametoken,amexicanwomanwhoimmigratestoamericawillhavetotrytodevelopherenglishproficiencyinordertobettercommunicatewiththelocalpeoplewhosenativelanguageisenglish.nonetheless,asiwillarguelateron,followingthelocalconventioninone'sdailylifeisonething,butacceptingthelocalcultureasone'sownisquiteanother.
Fortheamericanwhoisnowlivinginengland,eventhoughshehastoobeyalltheenglishlaws,shecanstillchoosetoretainheramericanidentityandlifestyle.Forexample,shemaycookamericanfoodathomeanddinewithherfriendsinamerican-stylerestaurants.inaddition,shecanstillspeaktoherchildrenwithheramericanaccentandteachherchildrenamericanvalues.thisisalsotrueforthemexicanwomanwhomovedtoamerica.
infact,itisnowgenerallyacknowledgedthatculturaldiversityshouldbeconsideredastrengthforanationaspeoplefromdifferentbackgroundswillhaveachancetolearnfromoneanother.Forexample,theamericanimmigrantwhocookamericanfoodathomemightalsosharewithherenglishneighborstheamericanrecipesandhelpbringtheamericancuisinetoanenglishdinnertable.themexicanwomanwhotakesenglishcoursesinthelocalcommunitycollegemayalsotutorheramericanclassmateswhoarelearningSpanishorstudyingmexicanculture.
inconclusion,peoplewhochoosetoimmigratetoadifferentcountrymayfacegreatchallengesandopportunitiesastheyadapttothenewenvironment.itistruethattheyneedtomaketheeffortstolearnthenewrulesandcultureofthehostcountry.Buttheyshouldalsobeencouragedtoretaintheirownculturesandlifestylesasnewmembersofamorediversesociety.
剑桥雅思考官范文第8篇
Youhaveafulltimejobandarealsodoingaparttimeeveningcourse.Younowfindthatyoucannotcontinuethecourse.
writealettertoyourtutor.inyourletter
describethesituation
explainwhyyoucannotcontinueatthistime
saywhatactionyouwouldliketotake
DearSirormadam,
mynameismuhamadabdul.iamtakingapart-timeeveningcourse.iamhavingahardtimekeepingupwiththiscourse.iamafraidicannotcontinuethecourse.
myproblemis,ihaveafull-timejob,from9am–5pm.Sometimes,iamaskedtostayextrahours,tofinishuptherestofthework.thatisbecausetheholidaysarecomingupsoon.alsoihavetodosomeworkpreparationsforthenextday.
atnightwhenigethome,iamtootiredtoevenprepareadinnerformyself.alsoihavenotimetostudyforthiscourse.
iwouldlikedropthiscoursethisquarter.thentakeitagainthenextquarter.So,pleaseacceptmysituation.
thankyouforyourcooperation
Sincerely
m.abdul
剑桥雅思考官范文第9篇
Youcelebratedyourbirthdaywithsomefriendslastweekinawasagreatsuccessandyouandyourfriendsenjoyedtheeveningverymuch.
writealettertotherestauranttothankthem.mentionthefood,serviceandtheatmosphere.alsosuggestanyimprovementstomakethingsbetter.
shouldwriteatleast150words.
shouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.
donotneedtowriteyourownaddress.
DearSir,
LastweekonSaturdaynightsomefriendsandihaddinnerinyourrestauranttocelebratemybirthday.iamwritingtothankyouforthegreateveningthatwehad.
allmyfriendsremarkedafterwardsonthestandardofthefoodandservicethatwereceived.allthefoodwasverytastyandwellpresented.ourwaiter,whosenamewasJames,wasfastandfriendlyandputwithwellwithourbadjokes!therestaurantitselfwaswarmandfriendlyandtheatmosphereshowedthatallthedinerstherewereenjoyingtheirevening.
iwouldlikethoughtosuggestoneimprovement.oneofmyfriendsisavegetarianandhefeltthatthechoiceforvegetarianswaslittlesmall.ifyoucoulddevelopthat,itwouldbeagreatadvantagetoyourrestaurant.
onceagainiwouldliketothankyouformyhighlyenjoyablebirthdaydinner.
Yoursfaithfully,
Rebeccaahlinder
剑桥雅思考官范文第10篇
afterbeinginvolvedinanaccident,youwerelookedafterbyanotherperson.writeaspeciallettertoexpressyourthanks.
shouldwriteatleast150words.
shouldspendabout20minutesonthistask.
DearJohn,
iamwritingtoexpressmyheartfeltgratitude.iamreferringtothatunfortunateaccidenttheotherday,wheniwasknockedoffmybikebyataxi.ifithadnotbeenforyourtimelyassistanceingivingmefirstaidandtakingmetoanearbyhospital,ifearthattheconsequencesmighthavebeenmuchmoreserious.
thedoctorsaysthatmybrokenlegishealingwell,andthebruisesandcutsisufferedwillsoonbecompletelybetter.inaddition,thetaxicompanyhasagreedtopaymyhospitalbills.everyoneagreesthatitwasyourquick-wittedresponseinthatemergencythathasleadtothissatisfactoryoutcome.
althoughnowadaysmanypeopletalkabouttheneedtobeunselfishandtohelpothers,weseeveryfewpeoplepracticingwhattheypreach.Butyoushowedbyyourselflessactionthatyouareanexception.ifthereweremorepeoplelikeyou,thisworldwouldbeamuchnicerplace.
Yourssincerely,
ted
剑桥雅思考官范文第11篇
本段主要是对familytypes中的couple,nochildren和couplewithchildren进行数据表述。
句1:句子的主体部分比较好理解,关键是其后出现的由with打头的介词短语。
主语couples=couple,nochildren&couplewithchildren.这里考官使用了从属类关联词,即题干中的信息如果构成部分,则可用一个包括这些组成部分的用词来替换这些部分。谓语部分使用generallytended来表达这部分的主要特点是:bebetteroff.这里用了比较级,比较对象是上段写的那两种familytypes。至于其后的with短语,其句式结构是with+lowerpovertyfor+名1(数据)+than+名2(数据).
这句话很好地体现了小作文的写作任务:Summarisetheinformationbyselectingandreportingthemainfeatures,andmakecomparisonswhererelevant.
句2:是对上面的soleparent和本段的couplewithchildrn进行的比较。而这也是很多人容易忽略的,即数据比较时,不仅需要横向比较,有时也得纵向对比。
itisnoticeablethat..是小作文常用句式。forbothtypesofhouseholdwithchildren对应soleparent和couplewithchildren,从句的主语是ahigherthanaverageproportion,将比较级用作前置定语,这种写法要多多注意。其后用了过去进行时,时间用atthistime来指代。对于小作文来说,大部分情况下是根据时间去选择时态的。如果时间是过去,就用过去时。不过很多人都默认是用一般过去时了,这里考官用的则是过去进行时,值得注意。